"ZipTie is a framework for Network Inventory Management" is not very descriptive and may confuse users into thinking that ZipTie will help them manage their inventory of their network - meaning all the hosts on the network.

Perhaps you should add something that describes what type of equipment it manages.

"ZipTie will help you discover and manage your network devices such as switches, routers, firewalls, etc."

Once ZipTie has the ability to gather and display host information, you can add this as a main feature as well.

"ZipTie will also let you discover exactly where your users are plugged into the network."

Thanks,

Tristan